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RE: Take a Chance, pt. 9 (a five-minute #freewrite)

in #fiction5 years ago

I think she's loveable now! She irascible for sure, but who wouldn't be with a good-natured guy trying every trick imaginable to antagonize or terrify them? That she keeps going along knowing is loveable. The scenes are always surprising and engaging.
plot and all
I'm enjoying them as little bits, and enjoying too wondering how on earth it has come to this.