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RE: SLC-S21W2 | Mastering CPR | A Comprehensive Guide to Cardiopulmonary Resuscitation
Student Name @aril.hatake
Overall Grade 5.7/10
Plagiarism Check Pass
AI Use No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | The student clearly explained the CPR steps, providing detailed instructions for each action and incorporating substitute items like a pillow or towels when a mannequin wasn’t available. They also mentioned safety precautions effectively and showed a practical approach in demonstrating CPR. | The student could improve by adding more technical details, such as the exact hand placement during compressions and the importance of maintaining the correct body posture. Illustrating the hand placement or adding a clearer description of the arm angle would make the explanation more precise. Also, further clarification on the rate of chest compressions could be added. These specific hand placement and the body angle could be visualized if the student provided his picture. Also, student didn’t mention anything about teaching CPR to 2-3 people and didn’t attach any picture | 1.3/2 |
| Question 2 | The student offered comprehensive explanations for CPR modifications based on the patient’s condition, covering pregnant women, obese individuals, and the elderly. Each section provided a practical and thoughtful approach, demonstrating good understanding of the modifications required for different body types. | The student could improve by further detailing the reasons behind these modifications. For example, adding explanations about the physiological changes in pregnant women or obese individuals during CPR would strengthen the argument. Additionally, providing more visual aids would enhance understanding, especially in explaining positioning adjustments. | 1.8/2 |
| Question 3 | The student listed key mistakes people make during CPR, such as incorrect chest compressions and improper hand placement, with a good understanding of how these errors can affect the effectiveness of CPR. They also highlighted the importance of timely intervention. | The student should provide more specific examples of real-life situations where these mistakes have occurred. Additionally, the inclusion of a deeper analysis of how these errors could be corrected or prevented would make the explanation more comprehensive. It would have been better if the student provided the relevant errors in points and also a reasonable explanation for each. Also, a clearer explanation of why the correct hand placement is so critical would add value. | 1.5/2 |
| Question 4 | The student created a well-thought-out campaign plan for CPR awareness, detailing the target audience, main messages, and strategies to raise awareness through social media, community events, and brochures. The timeline is clear and realistic, demonstrating good planning skills. | However, the campaign plan could benefit from more detail in the strategy, particularly regarding the content for social media, the structure of community events, and the distribution of brochures. The timeline is basic and could be improved by adding specific actions and milestones for each week. Additionally, the plan lacks a method for measuring success and does not mention potential collaborations with local organizations or businesses, which could help expand the campaign's reach. Moreover, there is no mention of follow-up activities to ensure that the campaign's impact is sustained over time. Including a longer-term strategy to maintain awareness and engagement would also enhance the plan's effectiveness | 1.1/2 |
| Question 5 | The student failed to give a brief explanation and provide an illustration | You were supposed to create an illustration on some software like Canva or you could have even hand-made it, illustrating the different steps of CPR, the difference in CPR of elderly, young, and infant and also the time when CPR is needed | 0/2 |
General Feedback
You have demonstrated a solid understanding of CPR and related concepts in your report, with clear explanations and a practical approach. However, there is room for improvement in providing more specific details and adding supporting visual aids to enhance the clarity and depth of your explanations. Additionally, more focus on specific examples, further elaboration on technical aspects, and a clearer, more structured campaign plan would significantly strengthen your work.
Regards
@abdu.navi03
Thank you