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RE: SLC21/WK5: Hands-On Practical

in #graphics-s21wk519 days ago

Hello @eliany thank you for participating in this week's lesson. We have assessed your entry and we present the result of our assessment below.

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Welcome back to class dear student.
Let me start by commending you for a job weldone, the effort put in this work is quite commendable.

Your logo appears cool, but you didn't get to show us the procedure for making your logo for the task.
Your flier design is nice and simple, however it still needs a lot to make it look very professional. The upper part of the design if divided into segment does not look so cool aesthetically but the other segment which is the one below looks better, moreso,you didn't perfectly follow your alignment thoroughly which I assume to be center alignment...continuous exposure to the lessons you've learnt so far would help you further in your quest to get it right.
You mockup looks good and suitable for your design. I wish you all the very best, Weldone!

CriteriaRemark
Plagiarism Free
AI Free
Attention to details4.7/5
Overall Outcome4.8/5
Total score9.5/10

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@lhorgic❤️

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The upper part of the design if divided into segment does not look so cool aesthetically

Please I don't really understand this part.

Thank you for your response

My bad! am just getting to reply this... What I mean is this, let assume the design is divided into two equal halves, the upper part and the lower part...now I meant the lower part seems to be more beautiful due to the attention given to that part while the upper part seems to be a bit scanty. Your choice font too didn't do much justice to it... All the same, I commend your effort.

Okay thank you I understand you now, i keep improving