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RE: SLC21/WK1: Empowering Life-Saving Skills: A Guide to First Response and Basic First Aid
Student Name: @wuddi
Time of checking: Within 24 hours of the homework
Overall Grade: [4.3/10]
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | You effectively described a real-life first aid situation, demonstrating your quick response and appropriate actions when encountering someone having a seizure. Your detailed account was clear and informative. | To enhance your narrative, consider adding more emotional context about how the incident affected you and your thought process during the emergency. Reflecting on personal learning points would strengthen your response further. | [Grade: 1.8] |
| Question 2 | You presented a thorough overview of the DRSABCD protocol, breaking down each step logically and clearly. Your examples effectively illustrated how to assess and manage a casualty in a motorcycle accident scenario. | You had an excellent understanding of the protocol. Good work! | [Grade: 1.5] |
| Question 3 | You listed emergency contact numbers for the UK, clearly explaining the purpose of each number. This provides valuable information for readers who may need assistance in emergencies. | To improve, consider adding more numbers, such as those for child abuse, women's helplines, and national suicide prevention. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 4 | You didn’t make any illustrations as asked in the requirements. | - | [Grade: 0] |
| Question 5 | You acknowledged your limitations regarding quiz access and expressed understanding of the implications for your assignment eligibility. | As you were unable to attempt the quiz this time, you didn’t qualify for this question. | [Grade: 0] |
General Feedback:
Your homework demonstrates a solid understanding of first aid principles and protocols, especially in your descriptions and explanations. While you've shown a grasp of key concepts, there's room for improvement in fulfilling all assignment requirements. Make sure to thoroughly read through the instructions to ensure you meet all criteria in future assignments. Keep pushing forward!
Thank you.
Regards,
@abdu.navi03
Thank you for going through the homework :)
0.00 SBD,
0.07 STEEM,
0.07 SP