(DTube Exclusive!) "Dying Inside" - Late Night Sessions
Just another late night rap session. Another late night, another uplifting verse... nawww just kidding, it's depressing as shit. Those are literally the only two "emotions" I have. Extremely inspired or extremely depressed. Never can really settle anywhere in between.
Thanks for checking this out, tell me what you think!
Lyrics
How to have faith if doubt exists? When you’re not so positive
When your only sittin by your life, sick of watching it
How I lost my son and then my wife, I can not forget
Still feelin it, and if the tables turned, you would feel like shit
had this pain for so long, will never forgive what that bitch did
Maybe it’s for the best, maybe I’m not supposed to have a kid?
Maybe I’m possessed, feels like I’m stuck under a gravel pit
I think I’m going crazy, I need to pack up on a travel kit
It’s not about a feelin, I don’t have those anymore
It’s about something to look to, when you’re getting off the floor
They say let go, let god, give all this shit to the lord
And I still try, even though I don’t believe anymore
I'm not the devil, I just do what I feel
I just wanna touch my soul, and prove that it’s real
from a former child’s future, visions of playin in fields
I just want to find a place where there’s happiness still
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Wow deep as usual and you sound incredibly real even with the yea yea thing! Good luck writing the second verse!
Thanks man, really appreciate it. You know I have to get all deep. I try not to, but it's usually all that pours out of me.
Btw you should apply for that role model contest you resteemed. You really deserve it and the cut needs you!
Thanks man, I literally just did it!
Hello person. You asked for comments so here's one: that was better than I expected. At first when you just started going "yeah" to the music twice in a row it was kind of awkward (of course, you're not the only one to do this, and it's one of the things I usually find annoying about rap to be honest), but then you started rapping and it actually sounds good, man, so hey, keep it up. I'm gonna follow you, cause I wanna hear the whole thing when it's finished.
Hey man, I really appreciate it.
Yea, I totally get the whole "yea yea" thing. After you said that, going back and watching it, it is a little awkward. I appreciate you giving it a chance and ending up diggin it. Check tomorrow, or rather later today, for a second verse. Should probably have it done by tonight. Either way, will have something new up tonight either way.
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Really dope man!! I can hear the pain in your lyrics, love that gravel pit/travel kit line too. Cant wait to hear the song!
That's awesome!!! Thanks for sharing!
You're welcome.
Thanks for checking out my music!