Hello person. You asked for comments so here's one: that was better than I expected. At first when you just started going "yeah" to the music twice in a row it was kind of awkward (of course, you're not the only one to do this, and it's one of the things I usually find annoying about rap to be honest), but then you started rapping and it actually sounds good, man, so hey, keep it up. I'm gonna follow you, cause I wanna hear the whole thing when it's finished.