You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: Ontology / water condensing

in #poetry6 years ago

A deft response to a piece which allows plenty of ambiguity in interpretation @hlezama. The central image is that of water, webbed, fogged (or even frozen) as it winds its way through our worlds (both inner and outer). The interplay between "chaos" and order is explored, as well as the idea you so perceptively noted, the balance between the traditional and the experimental, or conformity and innovation.

Sort:  

Thanks. I just loved the barrage of images and sensations condensed here. Wonderfully insightful and introspective.