We Glide At The Energy Of Passion
The storm walks about old ideas as we prepare for a new quantum leap. We keep hilarious drums in the silence of thought, we have become happy at the level of predators. Ice became a volcanic challenge in the songs of perfect tenors, we left the mystery of the solution on the plate of surprises.
Knowledge evacuated mistakes in mystical physics, the dilemma becomes true with the mystic of the word. We bow to heaven with the ideas of the universe, we are just small ants who play God. Perfect beauty is an illusory illusion, the only creator has the power of perfection.
Humility is the virtue of saints that overcome the greed of the mind, modesty is the fire of a wizard that gives us strength. We launched projects on the verge of reason, we pass sandstone storms with emerald lips.Stay in the embrace of snow colors, look at the sun and lift my spirit to the level of unlimited love.
- Original poetry written by @dobartim
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Those who are holy souls will reach the culmination of understanding that God is the center of energy and only God is the true eternity.
MENGANALISA ENERGI GAIRAH DI MATA SEORANG DOBARTIM
Oleh Moh. Ghufron Cholid
@dobartim merupakan salah seorang yang penuh kreativitas, yang memberi warna pada steem schools sekolah online tempat para steemian dunia berkumpul dan menerjemahkan kreativitas.
@dobartim membagikan pandangannya tentang energi gairah dalam tiga bait puisi yang dibuatnya. Latar suasana dipersiapkan secara apik di bait pertama.
Membaca bait pertama secara berulang kita seakan menemukan lompatan ide bagaimana seorang @dobartim memformat konsentrasi pembacanya. Diksi-diksi yang telah dipilih dan disajikan seakan menjadi lorong-lorong yang mengantarkan kita pada suatu keadaan, tentang bagaimana energi gairah terbentuk.
Tuhanlah puncak dari keindahan atau pusat energi yang sebenarnya, demikian kiranya intisari bait kedua yang hendak disampaikan @dobartim.
Dalam bait ketiga betapa @dobartim telah sampai pada puncak pemahaman. Betapa memakai filosofi padi adalah jalan yang mesti ditempuh bagi seorang yang telah ditempa dengan ilmu pengetahuan dan pengayaan batin yang telah mumpuni.
Maka membaca tuntas puisi @dobartim mulai dari bait pertama sampai bait terakhir, kita akan sampai pada sebuah kamar bernama kesadaran, bahwa sejatinya energi gairah itu hanya milik Tuhan.
Orang-orang yang berjiwa suci akan sampai pada puncak pemahaman bahwa Tuhanlah pusat energi dan hanya Tuhanlah sejatinya keabadian. Memakai filosofi pada adalah jalan terasyik dan terkhusyuk yang yang akan ditempuh.
Madura, 10 Mei 2018
Moh. Ghufron Cholid||@mghufroncholid31
English, please.
Awesome poetry ... I was something I had to slow read to enjoy ,.my best line..We bow to heaven with the ideas of the universe, we are just small ants who play God. ..
See you in poetry class in Steem Schools https://discord.gg/q9VEn5n
in snowball ice fragments to determine a calm mind.
perfect.
Thank you very much for your nice words
It's so pretty. I like these pictures.
Poetry is much better
Nice poem you've got here, I would love to see more and by the way, those pictures are lovely.
Thank you
as always great posts, beautiful poetry @dobartim
Why You have this opinion
because I like poetry that writes, it's beautiful, It is a very good poetry to read, how it deepens everything that says
🙌🙋👋hello friend@dobartim greetings again, excellent very good post I like very much who I am as always giving my contribution with this comment and my vote, if there is any doubt with a bad word, sorry for my bad English, it's just that I use the google translator, and as you know this tends to change and distort some words
Keep going, see you at the top
@dobartim the great poet, i actually love the way the last image is glittering
Nice, have a nice and successful day
Thank you
Always nice poetry 👍
Thank you