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RE: A gauche estate (90)

in #poetry6 years ago

Each stanza here feels like an attempt to see through towards something vanished. In the first, the people passed on; the second the day itself, and in the third... on the face of it a simple pond's surface but then that final word blows the whole thing wide open. The sense of loss, for so much and so many, is palpable. Just wonderfully expressed, @mamadini.

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Thank you, lazarus. Your comments always bring such a lovely cast this way. :)