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RE: Technologically Illiterate Addict

in #poetry8 years ago

Are you just dissin
Sit back and listen
There are a few things missin
But at least effort is a good transition
Thanks but I am not about competition
Or often using words that are basically repetition
But since you gave me more than permission
We have both failed our mission
Unless it is to just enjoy the pastime like fishin
Thinking we have perfection we are just wishin
Some things are about as real as superstition
Here and there that and this an'
Is it an apparition
In reality just another composition
Do it with conviction
Don't hold back no restriction
Setting limits equals constriction
24 real rhymes requires diction
And I just work in a kitchen
Is this a tasty dish then
Consonance ,assonance, onomatopoeia, what's your vision
Where is the preposition
Thanks for your position
We are all equal but I gladly grace you with a submission