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RE: /I only think of her in winter/ [ORIGINAL POEM by @mindhunter]
The fact that words strain, crack, and break might serve as the grounds for criticism: look at how this poem fails to reach perfection!
Correct. Great feedback. When I experience a poem’s radical failure, I must be measuring it against some other ideal.
A less bad poet would not make the distance between the virtual and the actual so palpable or so immediate, so there is hope.
We should share a few pints at the 'Steemit Festival of Poetry'!
...there is always hope.
You'll make a decent poet one day friend.
Thank you my poetic guru!