IT'S RAINING

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)


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It's raining heavily on me
At the hallway of my heart
A lot of cars has broken down
Though I try to fix mine up
But I think it's time I give it up

Several months have come and gone
Several months I've been all alone
Trying to see if I can walk home alone
Several months of raining days
Coming down even on my sunny days

At the hallway of my life
I fell the pain and the gain, but feel no shame
The only thing I've got, I keep inside
Some things have changed, but I am still the same
I pray the rain to wash away this misery

Is anybody walking my way?
Am losing my mind and can't believe
For it hurts like hell, this full emptiness in my chest
This thunderstorm has shaken off the best of me
Dear Lord, I can't stand this rain anymore.
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Wow.. Lovely poem, write up post.. When I say the title was quite expectant and I wasn't diapponted.
A lot of cars has broken down. Though I try to fix mine up. But I think it's time I give it up. My highlights 9f the post.
It sounds so really I kind of gave picture in my head
Awesome post

Thanks for the input, it is well appreciated.

Very brief and lovely poem there... that's really good. And I love the title also

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Thank you.

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