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RE: [Poem] - Remembering Tears in Paradise

in #poetry7 years ago

very beautiful!! It flows easily and the topic is quite interesting.. a paradise in which exists pain and suffering. Although I would then ask: can a place like this be a paradise? What exactly do we mean when we think of paradise?

A place? Or perhaps a state of mind that is not? filled with suffering.

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Thank you for your observations, @tobetada. I like your question. Thinking of paradise as a state of mind instead of just a physical place did not occur to me when I wrote this, but I think the metaphor is powerful!