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RE: Fall between the lines

in #spokenword7 years ago

<The unseen unfurls for the patient reader
not the visitor keen to be seen

I just adore this. I think while not the most dramatic, it is my personal favorite line. The idea of a patient reader, of someone taking the time to know you deeply and intimately and the truth that should be but is not always obvious: that the preening one focused on being seen is not ever going to be that patient reader.

I really enjoyed this and the recording of it as well :)

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Thank you ever so, @jrhughes. <3

That was a key aspect here for sure and such an important aspect to convey. You have a sharp eye indeed. ;)