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RE: A World Long Sundered -- Chapter 2
"The shower lasted the rest of the day which replaced their normal watering duties with a few items their mother needed catching up on. " -> So much details, reminds me of the Lord of the Rings books.
Hopefully, I'm not going overboard with the description. I appreciate your input, and such a comparison to a legendary series is humbling. Although, I know I have A LOT of improving to be worthy of such praise. Thank you so much!