RE: Haiku Saturday, Round 7, Contest and Community Building

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rlt47 (56)in #contest • 6 years ago (edited)

I love the imagery you create as the tired sun, blinks...
...and as the 'eyelashes' is ruined by this blinking.

The sun is blinking
the fall of the black night
ruins his iris hair

6 years ago in #contest by rlt47 (56)

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zeleiracordero (67) 6 years ago

Thank you! I appreciate your comment very much. It is satisfying to feel that we project so many images with so few words.

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rlt47 (56) 6 years ago (edited)

Yes, indeed I find that more satisfying than writing volumes. There is a great challenge in being a person of few words; but using them effectively.

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