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RE: Haiku Saturday, Round 7, Contest and Community Building
Hello everyone! I ventured to create for the first time a series of haikus to compose a poetic piece in order to accompany them this day in which I had never participated. So I hope you like it and tell me your impression. I titled it: "The twilight falls asleep" and I was very excited to do it.
https://steemit.com/poetry/@zeleiracordero/twilight-falls-asleep-original-poem-haikusaturday-round-7-prydefoltz
Very beautiful photos of the crecúspulo. Very good haiku.
Oooooh... Thank you! Do you think they are good haikus? I took great care!
Thanks teacher! I am honored by your comment. I feel more than satisfied.
nice set :)
Many thanks, @artowisdom. I love having access to your sensitivity and that you like it.
I love the imagery you create as the tired sun, blinks...
...and as the 'eyelashes' is ruined by this blinking.
Thank you! I appreciate your comment very much. It is satisfying to feel that we project so many images with so few words.
Yes, indeed I find that more satisfying than writing volumes. There is a great challenge in being a person of few words; but using them effectively.
are you sure you're not the teacher, @zeleiracordero?? ;) Awesome photos and haikus my friend. I've got some practicing to do =D
Thank you, thank you very much for the encouragement, partner!
Gorgeous composition, @zeleiracordero. Loved the metaphor. Genius!